Running In the Rain

Here are two takes of the same story.  I just say what comes into my head.  Perhaps I should be more organized. So, whaddaya think? Which one tells the better story?

Take I:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N48XFmraktc

Take II (ignore the little girl typing in the background):

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4z861ptlCYQ